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A young confession

by ~Valen-san

Stunning silver eyes with a tinge of blue
Stare at me below golden blonde hair
I never realized just how nice you looked
When you read or studied by the fountain
I never really noticed you until my poems
Began to unleash what I'd been holding in
I could never gain the courage to talk to you
Not even in the simplest of circumstances
I made up those stupid excuses so as to why not
I learned you had a knack for art
Which filled me with glee because so do I
Your undaunted smile is flashed my way
Almost every morning as I head out
To my apprenticeship where I write
About you, of course
My teacher thinks I'm silly but understands
"It's a teenage girl thing. I did it too."
I can't help myself, to tell the truth
My writing is my heart on paper
And you're currently the holder of it
I can't deny my feelings any longer
I think I love you
:iconvalen-san:
Oy, this is old. About a year or so, if I'm not mistaken. I like it though, which is why it's here. Most of my devinations will end up being peoms like this. Ahhh, poems writen under the influence of Dashboard Confessional.

~Valen-san~
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Wow your good. I have only made 1 poem and it won a contest! It was about big cats or something. I lost it anyway. The prize was a lame keychain, pencil, and something else. I was like what I have always wanted something that can gather more dust! Yours is a whole lot better. And Last year when we were tring to make a band why did y'all leave me in charge with the song. I have got the first 4 lines and it sounds like something from kingdom hearts. You should have wrote them.

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The night has called us out to play
We shall never appear in day
Our eyes glencing red
Our crypts are our eternal beds
Our fangs shinning bright
Blood dripping from the bite
We shall never rest in peace
Our hearts shall never beat
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:iconvalen-san:
I don't do songs. And the rhyme scheme on this is fracked up. But thanks. ^^ ~Valen-san~

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:iconreihasilver:
No problem. I wrote a card for my mom and it is really good and hanging up. It has a mother unicorn and her baby lieing down in the woods. I wrote:

Let unicorns Guide you on this special day and let nothing get in your way. Enjoy the life you are living and live in success for everything you have done. Never let life get you down , just rise up and try again. For you are a mother and a mother you shall stay for the rest of your life. There is never anything to worry about because you are the best mother to ever live.

My mom really liked that.

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The night has called us out to play
We shall never appear in day
Our eyes glencing red
Our crypts are our eternal beds
Our fangs shinning bright
Blood dripping from the bite
We shall never rest in peace
Our hearts shall never beat
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:iconvalen-san:
Aww, how sweet. ~Valen-san~

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:iconreihasilver:
Yes.

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The night has called us out to play
We shall never appear in day
Our eyes glencing red
Our crypts are our eternal beds
Our fangs shinning bright
Blood dripping from the bite
We shall never rest in peace
Our hearts shall never beat
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